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Post by Aunflin »

LOL, Brad--I love it! :clap: Now, this could get interesting... :smokin:
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Ok, I tweaked it slightly.

A close reading will show that the first God-like voice is moi (pretending to be imperious and blustery), and the second voice is yours :P

After all, we are sorta creating these worlds :wink:
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Indeed we are. :wink: But if God thinks anything like me...no wonder the world's as chaotic and confusing and generally screwed up as it is...

Well, here I go again...
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Ok, hopefully by the end of today, I'll put up a post describing the pickeloid homeworld.

Some amusing ideas occured to me while driving to work this morning, and I was reminded (in my usual way-out-in-left-field sorta way) of Stevie Ray Vaughn's classic bluesy-rock interpretation of "Mary Had A Little Lamb", in which he proved that you can twist almost any base material into something new & original ... it just takes a little creativity and a sense of fun. :deviate: :clap:
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Ok, posted.

It's worth noting that the number 99, in when converted from Base 10 into Roman numerals, is "IC".

I thought that was a nice touch. :lol:

EDIT: Tweaked it a bit further :wink:
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Nice reply, Aunflin :clap:

I did my best to one-up ya. I even put in some quasi-real pseudo science ... a necessary prerequisite for any decent sci-fi yarn. :twisted:

Let's see if we can wrap up this episode, so that others can play. We can always bring it back later, if boredom or creative urges compell us to.

p.s. Ya know, there's an odd sense of irony about opening a post that promptly dives down the toilet with the line "I don't know how long I can hold it !" :lol:
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Uh oh ... looks like we're in trouble with the Big D :shock:

/me begins to sweat a bit.
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Oh, yeah...I'll try to use my "god-like" powers to the best of my ability to prevent our untimely demise... :wink:
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Gods or not, we're out of our league, dude :help:
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(Brad bristles with dismay at the sudden appearance of an unseen figure)

“THANATOS !â€
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LOL
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(Aunflin shudders with remembered fear and embarrassment, rubbing at his now tender nose. "Now, that was a fright." He will never forget Death's icy stare, or the liquid warmth it induced in his pants. He flushes red as the stench of urine fills his nostrils... :wink: )

Very good, Brad. :thumb: You the man!
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Sorry aboutthat folks. I had something on my screen about WOnder Woman, Sylvester the Cat and Speedy Gonzales. Next thing I know I'm posting to Thanatos and his Ray of Death.

I hate it when that happens (mumble, grunble).
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moihahahahahahahahaha

:smash:

:clap: :hot: :banana: :twisted:
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Oh, good...some new participants! :clap: Good to read you here!

*Aunflin stares blankly at his computer terminal, idly wondering what he should post next...*

And as I think about it...anyone please feel free to post. (This is one of the funnest things I've done in a loooonnngg time. :thumb: )
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My mind is blank... maybe that last post wasn't such a good idea,

i couldn't resist.

:wall: :mrgreen:
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Don't worry about it. :mrgreen: Just ramble off whatever storyline you like, an extemporaneous blabber, as I like to call it.

*Britz' post has made Aunflin wonder where his copy of the Iliad is. Hmmm...where'd I put it?...And suddenly, inspiration strikes...*
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Love it. Pure Genius.

:banana: :hot:
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Thanks, Britz! :D Now, its your turn. :deviate:
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some of us can only strive for your near-perfection in writing... :banana:
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i'll try my best, hope you like it... :hot:
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I'm sure I will. I'm a cook and the food always tastes better when someone else cooks it--I feel the same about writing: it always reads better when someone else writes it. I'm a bit overly self-critical, though...

And thanks for the compliment...gives me hope for the future...though I don't know 'bout the "near-perfection" statement...

"Practice makes better--perfection is unattainable." That's my philosophy. :deviate:
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LOL--loved it. Very good, Britz and Hippie...very interesting. :clap:
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Minor moderation needed. A small commentary by hippe52 in the vollyball itself has now been shifted to the spectator commentary

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Thanks, Kilt. I was wondering about that...
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